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Frederick Douglass as painted by Jacob LawrenceWriting moves. Jacob LawerenceLawrence suggests the fluidity of writing in his 1938 painting of Frederick Douglass, great American orator and writer from the nineteenth century, former slave who wrote and re-wrote about his movement out of slavery, who used his writing to move.

This wiki, another fluid writing space, is under the development of students in the first-year writing program at Washington College, on the Eastern Shore of Maryland, not far from Douglass's place of birth. Here you will find research and resources for the study of writing, from metaphor to mechanics, commas to craft. Here you will find explorations in rhetorical grammar.
Rhetorical Grammar? You have probably been told at some point that you needed to correct some aspect of your grammar. That is not entirely accurate or true. You have known grammar, understood as the basic rules by which any and all meaningful sentences in a language are produced, since around the age of four; linguists now understand that most of those rules are learned unconsciously and internalized early on. For example: the basic rule in English (as in many other languages, though not all) that a sentence follows the Subject-Verb-Object order. The rules for commas, by contrast, are not grammatical but a matter of convention that becomes complicated (as with all punctuation) after the emergence of printing. What we want to think about and become better adept at, therefore, is something we can call rhetorical grammar: a grasp of the range of the rules, conventions, practices, traditions, figures of speech and writing in English; a grasp that allows the writer to know what to do with those conventions and rules and practices and traditions for the purposes of the writing. We need and want to be rhetorically effective when we write. Rhetorical grammar blends a better understanding of language and writing conventions and traditions with the actual practice of putting those conventions to work (which always includes the potential to violate those conventions knowingly) in our writing. We can read no better model of rhetorical grammar at work in writing, and in a writer's life, than that of Frederick Douglass. The subtitle of Martha Kolln's book Rhetorical Grammar indicates what we are after: "Grammatical Choices, Rhetorical Effects."

The goal of this assignment is to build a database of the choices and effects that a writer can deploy and develop in the context of her writing. You will each pick a specific topic from the large and unwieldy list of conventions and traditions of spoken and written English. You can pick a category that you have wanted or needed to work on: for example, commas (or more specifically, comma splices), or metaphor, or who vs. whom, or alliteration, or gerunds. The point is to make this a more manageable database for the purposes of our writing. I don't know everything there is to know about writing, not even the writing I already know how to do. That's a good thing. When I want to work on some aspects of my writing, for experimentation, for exploration, for refining, for strengthening, I consult a resource such as this. Consulting the resource, I begin to work. The point is to make the machine of writing more visible, once again.
To browse ideas for topics that you might work on and add to this wiki, consider the indexes from two resources:
The index of the Guide to Grammar and Writing
Silva Rhetoricae (rhetorical terms/figures)

You will write an entry for our WAC wiki [approximately 2 pages] that will contain the following categories:
[1]Definition: Provide a basic definition of the convention/rule/tradition/rhetorical figure.

[2]History: Provide a brief history of the rule/tradition/figure. For example, When do commas become a convention? Does someone invent them? Has the convention changed over time? Have there been notable problems or changes with commas in its history?

[3]Examples: This is a key section for our purposes: examples (at least 3) of the convention or practice or rule—drawn from literature and/or from your own writing or other sources. Examples might include both proper use of the convention, violations of the convention, suggestions for how to know the difference. In the case of rhetorical figures (which are not about rules being violated), it will help to provide vivid and multiple examples of the kind of writing at issue—what it looks and sounds like, how a writer might take a piece of writing and transform it using such a rhetorical figure or trope. Since this section is useful for writing practice, be expansive in both the examples and in ways that a writer can better grasp the topic and put it to work effectively in writing. In addition to using other writing resources to gather examples (such as Hacker or the web), consider going to the Writing Center for additional insight.

[4]Sources and Links: Provide references for the information resources you have consulted in writing your entry as well as any additional links and resources you would recommend for further use and study. Use MLA citation format (this section would be your works cited page).



Semicolon Usage:By: Caitlin CarterSemi-colons Definition: Semi-colons are used to sort out a list or to separate closely independent clauses. Semicolons can also be used to separate two independent clauses even if these two independent clauses are connected by a coordinating conjunction (1). History: Ancient Greeks first used the semicolon as a question mark. Then an Italian printer named Aldus Manutius revived its use in 1494. Semicolons first started to appear in London in a 1568 chess guide, but it was scarce in writing even up to 1623. The semicolon was not used for relation causes or for interrogation purposes then; punctuation was used for oratorical purposes, so a semicolon was used to create a two-second pause in a person’s speech. In 1793, the semicolon was used to distinguish contraries and divisions, but the common thought was that it was still used for a pause. The semicolon hadn’t reached mass audiences, yet in 1848 Edgar Allen Poe complained about the over use of semicolons in writing. In 1865 grammarian, Justin Brenan, talked of the rejection of semicolons and how they had been disappearing from newspapers, books, and the like. A significant decline in semicolon usage occurred between the 18th and 19th century, from 68.1 semicolons per thousand words to only 17.7 (2). What some suspect is that the decline in the use of semicolons came with technological advances, such as the telegraph. Morse code stunted punctuation use in general; words and punctuation went for $5 each, which meant shorter sentences with less punctuation. The decrease in the use of semicolons continued when a 1903 writing guide said as a rule whenever someone is tempted to use a semicolon they should use a period instead. The California State Board of Education adopted this guide as a textbook three years later (2). Semicolon usage is not popular in modern society, but its unique function keeps it a favorite punctuation mark for some writers. Examples: One would use semicolons between clauses which could stand alone, but which are closely related. “He ran with his shirt over his head; he had forgotten his umbrella once again (3).” “She couldn’t dance in her favorite ballroom; it was being renovated (3).” In the following example, there could be a period after “England,” but a semicolon is less harsh of a stop. “Rutland is once again the smallest county in England; no other area in the land is famous for so little (3).” A semicolon is also used when a second clause expands or explains the first. “Neither of us spoke; we merely waited patiently in silence to see what would happen (3).” Semicolons are also used to punctuate mixed lists in continuous prose writing. “Four objects lay on the desk: a large book; a spiral-bound notepad; a glass vase containing flowers; and a silver propelling pencil (3).” Semicolons are used when successive clauses describe a sequence of actions or different aspects of the same topic. “There was a sharp, bracing air; the ground beneath us was dry; the sea was calm and clear (3).” They are often used before clauses which begin with nevertheless, therefore, even so, and for instance. “He usually took great care; even so he made few errors (3).” They can be used to mark off a series of phrases or clauses which themselves contain commas. “For this exercise you will need the following materials: some scrap paper; a pen, preferably blue or black; some A4 envelopes; and some good, white, unlined writing paper (3).” Semicolons are used to avoid ambiguity in sentences composed of phrases of different length and mixed content. “The Chairman welcomed the President, Dr. Garvey; the Vice-President Mr. Barncroft and his wife; several delegates from the United States; and members of the public who had been invited to attend (3).” If one is unsure if they should use a semicolon, it is perfectly acceptable to use a period instead because semicolons are one of the most commonly misused forms of punctuation in the English language. References: 1. "The Semicolon." The Semicolon. 2004. Capital Community College. 29 Nov. 2008 http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/semicolon.htm. 2. Collins, Paul. "Has modern life killed the semicolon?" Slate. 20 June 2008. 29 Nov. 2008 http://www.slate.com/id/2194087. 3. "How to Use Semicolons." How to Use Semicolons. 2000. Mantex. 29 Nov. 2008 <http://www.mantex.co.uk/samples/semicolons.htm>.